Sorry if audio isn’t up to mark, I didn’t have access to a much better microphone.
Zbrdst bohat achii ghazal
How old are u??
good attempt. But you should have posted it in written form, bad narration has ruined its taste. (sorry … not an intent to let you down just a healthy criticism)
21 this May if I survive the pandemic
No. It’s alright. Honest critique means most to me as it lets me overcome the shortcomings in future. I had 4-5 friends narrate it first, then my brother, but none of us likes poetry besides me, so that was even worse, hence, I had to narrate myself as a last resort.
And I fully realise it’s not as good as writing, maybe not even half good, as a writer I am totally aware recitation has never been my stronghold.
In sha Allah you will be …
but I must say you have a strong hold on language … May Allah bless you even more
InshaAllah talah, we’ll all make it through these testing times.
Thank you, means a ton